Monday, 19 August 2013

body 2 & 3

assalamualaikum. haaiiiii badd in da house

okay okay okay straight to the point. teech here is my story in the making of body paragraph 2 and 3. well, me and mira made a mistake by dividing the paragraph each. mira did paragraph 2, well for me paragraph 3 of course. we didn't actually know that we are not allowed to do that. yes yes i know its a group work, but ermm i don't know, i'm the one who made the decision to divide it. well that is what we call  last minute work. i think you know what i mean right. yoshh back to the story, i don't know about mira, but i was having problem in making the paragraph 3. after making the outline i did not really check whether the point is suitable or correct or not. so i could not write the essay until the last minute when i decided with mira to change the point as the old point is wrong, completely wrong -_-". luckily me and mira managed to finish it.

so here is what happen after teech finish checking our essay. :

                                              






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